Not Enough Time on Skis
Ron Mock read Castles 108, looked carefully at the map of Tarquint, and raised an objection: four days on skis would not give Marty, Elfric, Eadmar and Teothic enough time to reach a mountain that must be somewhere near the northeast corner of East Lake. He's right, and I have three things to say about it.
First, thank you to Ron. Critical comments are very often helpful. I will edit chapter 108 and add more days to Marty's expedition.
Second, a reminder: Castles is a draft. Once I've "published" the whole story on this blog, I will revise it before seeking a publisher.
Third, an invitation to the rest of you: I'm always open to suggestions. Send me emails (firstname.lastname@example.org) or use the comment function on Story and Meaning.