Thursday, January 9, 2020

The Line


Good vs. Evil

The line separating good and evil passes not through states, nor between classes, nor between political parties either – but right through every human heart…even within hearts overwhelmed by evil, one small bridgehead of good is retained. And even in the best of all hearts, there remains…an uprooted small corner of evil.                           Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn, The Gulag Archipelago

In the last year of World War 2, while serving in the Red Army, Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn witnessed war crimes by Russian soldiers against Polish and German civilians.  It was “pay-back time” for atrocities committed by the Germans against Russians in 1941-1943.  For a time, Solzhenitsyn agreed.  But in early 1945 Solzhenitsyn wrote a letter to a friend condemning Russian crimes against civilians and criticizing the state, including the “boss” (Joseph Stalin), for not preventing them.  The letter was intercepted by the secret police, and Solzhenitsyn, though a decorated veteran, was sentenced to eight years in a labor camp, followed by internal exile.  Solzhenitsyn’s experiences in prison, exile, and labor camp are reflected in many of his books: One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich (1962), Cancer Ward (1968), The Gulag Archipelago (1973), and others.  It was during his years in captivity that Solzhenitsyn abandoned Marxism and embraced Eastern Orthodox Christianity.
A disillusioned soldier unjustly imprisoned; we might expect Solzhenitsyn to don the mantle of righteous indignation, to condemn his enemies, and to campaign for their destruction.  To be sure, his books do expose the heartless criminality of the Soviet system, and Solzhenitsyn freely criticized parties and states.  But Solzhenitsyn was not content to merely condemn the evils of others.  We who recognize the injustice of the other should also examine our own hearts.  If we refuse to admit our own sins, we deceive ourselves and increase the likelihood of new atrocities.
Solzhenitsyn’s famous quote about the line between good and evil presents a challenge to storytellers.  As we learned in middle school, good fiction requires “conflict” of one sort or another.  In a story, something has to happen.  The protagonist does something; she acts to achieve some goal or avoid some bad result, even if she acts in ignorance of her true situation.  In many stories, the conflict is obvious, a battle of good guys versus bad guys: sheriff against bandits, Odysseus versus the Cyclops, superhero against arch-villain, and so on.  The story ends with the death or elimination of the villain or (in tragedy) the death or elimination of the hero. 
Solzhenitsyn’s insight warns us that such stories are too simplistic.  Conflict doesn’t just happen between good and bad people (or classes or parties or states); the more important conflict often occurs within a person.  The challenge for the storyteller is to show “action” that is internal to a character, her struggle against temptation (or, conversely, her yielding to it).  How does one display the slow acquisition of good character or an equally gradual slide into viciousness? 
Iris Murdoch wrote that the moral life is not so much about decisions to act as it is about attention, seeing the world accurately.  “I can only act in a world that I can see.”  And Murdoch emphasized that paying attention takes effort; it is possible to see the world inaccurately, unjustly, egoistically.  In fact, Murdoch thought egocentricity was the natural default setting for human beings.  The battle to overcome it is central to moral improvement.  This, too, is a challenge to the storyteller.  How does an author show the interior life of a character?  How do we show what he sees and what he attends to?  It’s not impossible; great writers have done it.  But it’s hard—far harder than describing a chase, a battle, or even a quest.
I make no claim of success in this arena.  The characters in my stories exhibit vices and virtues, which they display in various actions.  My characters do things.  But it’s not clear that the line between good and evil lies within them; too often the line seems to fall between good guys and bad guys.  It remains my ambition to write good stories.  I’ll have to keep working at it.



Thursday, January 2, 2020

A removal

Castles Disappears

    For four years a draft version of Castles, a science fiction novel, has occupied several pages on Story and Meaning.  I have deleted those pages.  So if you're looking for Castles here, you're out of luck.
     Never fear!  I deleted Castles because I am actively revising it, with help from my sister-in-law, Dawn Link.  I hope to announce later this year its publication.  If things go well, readers will have an actual book in their hands before long.